feedback

here on our feedback we have a mix of different opinions on our radio, Kayla said that the radio show was interesting as it would open minds for people who have no idea about this topic and that they can learn about what happens in society and that it really does affect people. Ben also agreed with Kayla and said that it felt very depressing because it happened to someone in real life that he knew.

we then went ahead and asked them about the strength and weaknesses and ben said that we gave it a platform so that it can be spoken about and realise that it can be spoken about. Kayla said that didn't raise much of an awareness so what we could have done is had a message in the beginning or the end of nicks voice over but unfortunately we do not have enough time and he has gone on holiday so instead I will try my best to find another person similarly to fill in the ending voiceover or just find someone who can help with this. she also said that the storyline was understood well and that we have tried o raise an awareness but we just need to do a little bit more so we can improve this by making the message more clear.

we asked them about what audience and what age group they think this would fit into and ben said its for everyone who goes through these issues like families and children as well as teenagers and Kayla said they're for young adults, adolescents and teenagers of this generation as most of us are on social media and can easily get influenced an effects the generation. 

the improvements that they gave us was that we should work on the aim of our radio nd speak about it but unfortunately this is a two people job speak about it so unfortunately I will have to try and find a replacement. 

overall Ben and Kayla both said it was a good radio and hat they would listen to it again as it had some drama in it which was the girl who took her own life because of bullying so the message for that was we was trying to raise awareness about how this stuff actually effects people around all sorts of types homes and that we should not always be rude to other people especially the ones we don't know as we have no idea hat is going on in their lives.  

what we also need to do is add copyright music and that we need to add some effects in the back so that it sounds more like a radio drama as we have a good introduction to open our show.